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Mastering Your Student Activity List for College Admissions

Updated: Sep 30

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Your student activity list is crucial in presenting a well-rounded view of your character beyond the classroom. Admissions officers may look here first to evaluate your

interests and assess how you may fit into their college culture.

This post will help you provide specific context about your values and ambitions.


Choosing the Right Activities to Highlight


Select activities that matter most to you and reflect your personal life views.

If you're a member of a sports team, a school club, or a community service, be sure to

cross-reference themes and allocate one theme per activity to cover more bases. For example, teamwork for sports, creativity for clubs, etc. Repetition is the enemy. Each entry is limited to approximately 40 words, so be as purposeful and concise as possible.


Demonstrate Self-Awareness


Colleges are eager to admit students who know who they are, what inspires

them, and how they will take charge of their college career. For example, if you

organized a fundraiser that garnered $1,000 for a local charity, when sharing this or a

similar experience, describe not yourself but who the funds will benefit and how.

This speaks to your altruism and humanity, demonstrating that your goals are not

focused solely on yourself. Above all, display your ability to initiate change or improve

the lives of others. You can!


Quantifying Your Achievements


Adding numbers to your descriptions strengthens your application. Use numbers to be specific, but don't overdo it, two or three times is fine. For example, instead of stating you volunteered, say you donated 50 hours to a local food bank, serving 200 families over that time. This gives a clearer picture of your commitment.


Crafting a Compelling Description


Every activity you feature should start with a powerful action verb, detail your responsibilities, and explain the outcome. For instance, “Coordinated a community garden project where I led a team of 10 volunteers, resulting in 500 pounds of fresh produce distributed to local shelters.” This method is punchy and keeps your entries engaging, succinct, and showcases how you contribute to improving your community.


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Tailoring Your List to Align with College Values


Research each college program you wish to submit applications to and align your activity list with their mission and values. If a school emphasizes mental wellness and promotes therapy dogs for students with ADHD, be sure to reference your contributions to the local animal shelter or the day you washed cars to help raise awareness for ADHD. Making connections to your desired college programs confirms you'll be a good fit and a welcome addition to their campus culture. To use similar strategies in the Common App essay, watch EAE's video tutorials for more guidance.


As you prepare your college application, circle back to me, Dr. B, to enhance your narrative writing and ensure your best submission possible.


I started Effective Admissions Essays to empower young adults with proactive mindsets and enable them to tackle complex writing tasks in small increments. With my actionable routines in place, student writing muscles are better conditioned to sustain collegiate coursework. Let's tighten your Common App and refine those supplementary essays!


EAE's Remote Edits help you get there!


xx

Dr. B

 
 
 

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